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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

This summer holiday, I make a trip to Sanya with my parents, which was unforgettable experience for me. In the morning, we got to the hotel locating in the center of the city. After breakfasts, we began our travel. At first, we took the bus to an aquarium (水族馆). Wandering in it, and of course I saw such many different kinds of fishes that I couldn’t believe my eyes. We could also see the show of dolphins. Then we had lunch in a restaurant, which position was near the aquarium. The seafood, which was very famous in China, was tastily. After lunch, we went swimming. The sea was blue and the beach was golden. We all enjoyed us in the sea. During this trip, we also went to some places which were interesting and well known in Sanya. All at all, we had a good holiday.

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【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文。文章叙述的是作者暑假在三亚和父母旅行的情况。那是一次难忘的旅行。

第一处：考查时态。句意：这个暑假，我和我的父母去了三亚，这对我来说是一个难忘的经历。这里在讲一件过去的事情，所以句子用一般过去时态，故把make改成made。

第二处：考查不定冠词。句意 ：这个暑假，我和我的父母去了三亚，这对我来说是一个难忘的经历。此处unforgettable以元音音素开头前面用an表示“一”，故在was 后加an。

第三处： 考查非谓语动词。句意：我们到达了位于市中心的旅馆。短语be located in坐落于，在句中作定语，故用过去分词。故把locating改为located。

第四处：考查固定用法。句意：早饭之后，我们开始旅游。此处breakfast是不可数名词，故把breakfasts改成breakfast。

第五处：考查现在分词作状语。句意：漫步其间，我当然看到了各种各样的鱼，我简直不敢相信我的眼睛。 此句是现在分词作时间状语，不是并列句，故把and去掉。

第六处：考查so和such的区分。句意：漫步其间，我当然看到了各种各样的鱼，我简直不敢相信我的眼睛。名词前有表示数量的词many修饰时用so ，故把such改成so。

第七处：考查定语从句。句意：然后我们在一家靠近水族馆的餐馆吃午饭。此处restaurant做先行词，在后面的定语从句中作定语，故把which 改whose。

第八处：考查形容词。句意：这些海鲜在中国很有名，味道很好。此处be动词后面用形容词作表语，故把tastily改成tasty。

第九处：考查固定结构。句意：我们在海里都玩得很开心。enjoy oneself 玩的开心，此处应该用反身代词作宾语，故把us 改ourselves。

第十处：考查固定词组。句意：总而言之，我们度过了一个愉快的假期。All in all 总而言之，故把at 改in。