Question

  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) ，不计分。

  Dear friends,I have some advices about computers to share with you. Now the computer had become a good friend of us students. It has made our life more co?lourful. We can get information fast under its help. Through the Internet we can talk with people thousands of miles far away.

  However,there have some disadvantages. It gives us some trouble. I'm afraid that we spend a bit too much time play games in front of the screen. Our studies and health are getting worse. Our parents are beginning to worry us. In addition,we surely have less time leaving to get together with others. In this case,the com?puter is taking away our human nature.

  My suggestion is that we would use the computer to improve our life and work on the one hand,and enjoy the sunshine or fresh air with our friends on the other.

Answer 1

Dear friends,I have some advices about computers to share advice with you.  Now the computer had become a good friend of us has students. It has made our life more colourful. We can get infor?mation fast under its help. Through the Internet we can talk with with people thousands of miles "Taj^ away.

However,there have some disadvantages. It gives us some are trouble. I'm afraid that we spend a bit too much time play playing games in front of the screen. Our studies and health are getting worse. Our parents are beginning to worry A us. In addition,about we surely have less time leaving to get together with others. In left this case,the computer is taking away our human nature.

My suggestion is that we would use the computer to imshould prove our life and work on the one hand? and enjoy the sunshine or fresh air with our friends on the other,and