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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last weekend,after pay a visit to the city of New York,I visited the Smithsonian Institutions National Air and Space Museum,where lies in Washington,D.C.

The museum,which covers a area of 18,000 square meters,is made of 24 exhibition halls.All kinds of planes, rockets,missiles and spaceship of great importance and variously old instruments that famous pilots and astronauts used are on display.In addition,I see copies of some satellites and aircraft.More interestingly,I tried operating on some aircraft by myself.During the visit,I took lots of pictures as well.

This brief visit helped myself learn much about the history of human's space exploration.It made me more interesting in science and technology.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。讲述了作者上周末的游玩经历，并着重介绍了Space Museum以及他在博物馆中的所见所闻所感所获。

After是介词，后面可跟分词短语，不能直接跟动词原形。故将pay改为paying。

“...and Space Museum,where lies in Washington,D.C.”逗号后面是非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的Space Museum，从句中缺主语，所以不能用地点状语引导词where。故将where改为which。

“The museum,which covers a area of 18,000 square meters”冠词修饰名词area，因为area是元音开头的单词，所以要用an。故将a改为an。

“is made of 24 exhibition halls.”此句考查be made up of...由...组成。故添加up。

“All kinds of planes, rockets,missiles and spaceship”句中四个名词并列，前三个都是复数形式，spaceship是可数名词，所以需加s。故将spaceship改为spaceships。

“of great importance and variously old instruments that...”句中of great importance=very important和variously所处的成分并列，修饰名词old instruments ，需用形容词，variously是用来修饰动词的副词。故将variously改为various。

纵览全文，是在讲述作者上周末的经历，通篇都是过去时态，“I see copies of some satellites and aircraft.”中see作谓语，应用过去式。故将see改为saw。

“I tried operating on some aircraft by myself.”operate是及物动词，后面直接跟名词，不需加介词。故将on去掉。

“This brief visit helped myself learn much about ...”help是动词，myself在此句中充当宾语，需用宾格形式，而不能用物主代词。虽然有help oneself这种用法，但意思是请自便，不符合句意。故将myself改为me。

“It made me more interesting in science and technology.”make sb interested in...使某人对...感兴趣，interesting用来形容某物是有吸引力的。故将interesting改为interested。