Question

5．My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month．It is in the downtown area，but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport．
We lived in a comfortably doubleroom with a big bath．What I liked best were the free highspeed Internet connection in the room．I checked my email messages every day．I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing．The food was wonderful with reasonable prices，and we enjoyed several local dish．
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me w ho is going to Beijing．

Answer 1

分析 作者上个月和爸爸去北京旅行时住在南湖宾馆，南湖宾馆交通便利，条件舒适，所以作者推荐朋友去北京时就到南湖宾馆住宿．

解答 My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month．It is in the downtown area，but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport．
We lived in a comfortably doubleroom with a big bath．What I liked best were the free highspeed Internet connection in the room．I checked my email messages every day．I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing．The food was wonderful with reasonable prices，and we enjoyed several local dish．
It is such∧great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me w ho is going to Beijing．
详解：
1．visit改为visited；考查动词的时态，根据时间状语last month，可知是发生在过去的事情，故用一般过去时．
2．but改为and；考查连词，这里表示并列关系，故用and．
3．去掉to；考查介词，anywhere是副词，前面不加介词，去任何地方，直接用go anywhere．
4．comfortably改为comfortable；考查形容词，此处用形容词作定语修饰名词doubleroom．
5．were改为was；考查主谓一致，从句What I liked best 作主语，谓语动词用单数．
6．for改为with；考查介词，share with是固定用法，意思是"与某人分享"．
7．taking改为taken；考查分词作定语，相片"和"照"之间是被动关系，故用过去分词作后置定语．
8．dish改为dishes；考查名词单复数，dish作为"一道菜"讲是可数名词，前面有several，故用名词复数．
9．such后面加a；考查冠词，hotel是可数名词单数，所以such后加 a．
10．me改为mine；考查物主代词，any friend of后用名词性物主代词．

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