Question

14．在中学生中，互赠生日礼物成为一种时尚，有的甚至还去饭店搞生日聚会．对此同学们有不同的看法．假设你是李华，请你根据下表提示，给某英语报社编辑写一封信，并谈谈自己的观点．

赞成	为同学们提供交际机会；利于增进同学之间的友谊；学习之余可以放松心情．
反对	容易造成对时间和金钱的浪费；导致攀比；对青少年学习和成长造成不利影响．
你的观点	…

注意：1．词数：100左右（信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数．）
 2．短文须包括表中的全部内容，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
 3．参考词汇：攀比：keep up with the Joneses
Dear Editor，
I'm a middle school student named Li Hua．Recently，we often have to buy presents for our
                                                     
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本题主要围绕对中学生过生日赠送礼物，甚至举办生日聚会的看法，表述正反两方面的意见，并阐述自己的观点．本题是典型的议论文写作，可采用相关的固定格式使文章更流畅．本文第一段最后一句we are invited to their birthday parties in expensive hotels，which caused us to think whether students should spend so much money for birthdays．首先使用了which领导的非限制性定语从句，从句中又有whether领导的宾语从句；第二段中Some students think it provides us with…some other students think it's a waste of money…使用了Some…some other一些…另一些…的句型；第三段第一句As far as I'm concerned，it's not easy for our parents to make money使用了As far as I'm concerned就我而言这一固定句式．在短语使用上，使用了provide sb．with sth．提供某人某物，a waste of…浪费…，get into形成等较好的短语．在词语的使用上，本文最大亮点就是连词及副词的使用，如第一段中Recently、sometimes第二段中besides、However第三段中So这些词语的使用使得文章行文更为流畅、自然，大大提高了文章的水平．总结：议论文写作时注意固定格式：some…．the other…．as far as I'm concerned…．

解答 Dear Editor，
     I'm a middle school student named Wang Hua．Recently，we often have to buy presents for our classmates'birthdays，and sometimes，we are invited to their birthday parties in expensive hotels，which caused us to think whether students should spend so much money for birthdays．（高分句型）
     About this there are two different views．Some students think it provides us with a good chance to communicate with each other and develop our friendship，and besides，we can relax after hard work at school．（高分句型） However，some other students think it's a waste of money and time and can lead to getting into the bad habit of trying to keep up with the Joneses，which has a bad effect on our growth and studies．（高分句型）
     As far as I'm concerned，it's not easy for our parents to make money and keep us at school for education．（高分句型）So there is no need for us to do like that．We must treasure our parents'labor and put our hearts into our studies．
     What do you think about it？I'm expecting your reply．
Yours，
Wang Hua

点评 写作的文章较开放式的文体，比较好写．学生在写作的过程中，首先思路要清晰，要对所表达的句子通顺的说出来，遇到不会的要学会替换所用语，来达到同样的意思．在每一篇作文中，对于表达观点的句子，都要用上起承转合的连词来加强文章的层次感，适当运用俗语，运用平时常用的句式来使文章富有变化，表达地道得体．