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【题目】假定英语老师课上要求同学之间交换改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My best friends gave me a present in a box on my birthday. It was a little heavy, which made me very curiously. So I intended to open it at once but she prevented me do so. She said I mustn’t open it until I went back home but gave me a naughty smile. Although there is a strong desire in my mind to know that was inside the box, I just did as she said. On the way to home, all I did was thinking about the puzzle. Finally I opened the box. It was a cup printing with a pink word — friendship. It was so lovely that I liked very much. Now, every time I use a cup, I will think about her and the friendship between us.

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【解析】试题分析:本文讲诉的是作者最好的朋友在她过生日的时候送给了她一个杯子，表达了作者对她俩友谊的珍惜。

【1】friends →friend 考查名词单复数。根据后文：So I intended to open it at once but she prevented

me do so. 中的she可知friend是单数，故friends →friend

【2】curiously →curious 考查make的用法。Make sb do/make sb adj 让某人……；curiously是一个副词，而make后面要接形容词，故curiously →curious

【3】do →doing 考查固定用法。Prevent sb (from)doing sth；阻止某人做……，故do →doing

【4】but →and 考查连词。句意：她说要等到我回家后才能打开它并且给了我一个调皮的微笑。根据句意，两个小句子之间不存在转折关系而是并列关系，故but →and

【5】is →was 考查动词时态。根据全文可知看出此篇的时态应该是过去时，故is →was

【6】that →what 考查连接代词。What在此句中引导的是宾语从句且在从句中作主语，句意：尽管我很想知道盒子里面有什么，但是我还是照着她说的做了。故that →what

【7】去掉to 考查副词。Home是一个地点副词，前面不能有介词to，在回家的路上应该就是：On the way home，故去掉to

【8】printing →printed 考查非谓语动词。句意：是一个杯子，杯子上被印着粉红色的单词——友谊。…….印有……可知是……被印着…..才符合语法习惯，所以用非谓语动词ed形式表示被动，故printing →printed

【9】like后加it 考查宾语。That后面接一个完整的句子，但这个句子缺少宾语，所以liked后面要加一个宾语，故like后加it

【10】a →the 考查定冠词。不定冠词a表示泛指，定冠词the表示特指，很显然文中的cup是一个特指，特指“我”朋友送给“我”的那一个，故a →the