Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

October 28, 2017 is an unforgettable day for I took part in the Jingzhou International Marathon! It was the first time that Jingzhou had hosted such international sports event and there were nearly 10,000 runners joined in it. That morning, at the moment I reached the starting place—Guan Gong Yiyuan, I found it crowded with a sea of people, exciting and cheerful. It surprised me most was a 70-year-old runner beside me, which had gone in for 92 competitions after his retirement! Hearing the sound of the starting gun, I dashed out like an arrow. But with the race going on, I felt my legs as heavily as blocks of stone. I was about to give up while the old man cheered me up. Because I was very tired, with his encouragement, I finished my first mini Marathon.

Answer 1

【答案】1.is→was

2.such后面加an

3.joined→joining

4.删除at

5.exciting→excited

6. It→What

7. which→who

8.heavily→heavy

9. while→when

10.Because→Though/Although

【解析】小题1 考查动词时态。句意：2017年10月28日对我来说是一个难忘的日子。根据后面的I took part in the Jingzhou International Marathon!可以得知回忆以前日子发生的事情，用一般过去时，故is 改为was。

小题2 考查冠词。句意：这是第一次荆州举办这么国际化的赛事。表示“如此的”用such+a/an +adj +noun。故such后面加an。

小题3 考查非谓语动词。句意：有一万名选手参加马拉松比赛。前后动词之间没有连词，根据谓语动词were可以判断出第二个出现的动词用非谓语结构，选手和参加是主动的关系。故填joined改为joining。

小题4 考查介词。句意：那天早上我一到起跑点就看到一片人海。一…就用the moment引导状语从句。故删除at。

小题5 考查形容词。句意：拥挤的人群兴奋开心。表示人兴奋要用-ed形式。故exciting改为excited。

小题6 考查引导词。句意：最令我惊讶的是站在我身旁的一位70岁高龄的选手。从句位于句首，是主语从句，动词惊讶前用what做主语从句的主语。故It改为What。

小题7 考查关系代词。句意：这位70岁的老人已经参加过92场比赛了。先行词是runner，在定语从句中做主语。故which改为who。

小题8 考查形容词。句意：随着比赛的进行，我感觉我的双腿像石块一样沉。系动词后面用形容词。故heavily改为heavy。

小题9 考查时间副词。句意：我正要放弃时那位老人过来鼓励我。be about to do…when真要做…这时。故while改为when。

小题10 考查状语从句连词。句意：尽管我很累但是有他老人家的鼓励，我跑到了终点。前后是“尽管…但是”的含义，让步状语从句的连词。故Because改为Though/Although。