Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的新西兰笔友 Eric 在汉语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信，内容包括：

1. 表示祝贺；

2. 表扬他为此付出的努力；

3. 表达对他未来的祝愿。

参考词汇：汉语演讲比赛 the Chinese Speech Contest

注意：1. 词数 100 字左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Eric,

How’s everything going?

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Eric,

How’s everything going? Learning that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.

As your friend, I am well aware that it is your diligence, perseverance and effective learning methods that contribute to your success. I am deeply impressed with your standard pronunciation and fluent Chinese. There is no doubt that having a good command of Chinese enables you to see the world through a new window. Chinese learners like you will play an important role in promoting better understanding and cooperation between China and your country.

Wish you greater progress and further success in learning Chinese!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，你的新西兰笔友 Eric 在汉语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信，内容包括：1. 表示祝贺； 2. 表扬他为此付出的努力；3. 表达对他未来的祝愿。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：the first prize (一等奖)；the Chinese Speech Contest (汉语演讲比赛)；impressed with (印象深刻)；play an important role in (在……起重要作用)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用现在完成时、一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。