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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Chaparral Middle School is a public school in California, that was opened in 1976. We serve approximate 1350 students in grades 6-8 now. Regular school hours are from 7:45 am to 1:55 pm. Chaparral offers different learned programs all centered around student success and achievement, as evidenced by the honors from that we have received throughout the years. Our school was honoring as a California Distinguished School in 1994. Many another programs make Chaparral Middle School an unique place of learning. One example was our outdoor education program. These experience give students the opportunity have memorable learning practice.

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【解析】这篇文章主要介绍了加利福尼亚的Chaparral中学。

考查定语从句。which was opened in 1976.是一个定语从句，修饰先行词Chaparral Middle School，关系词在从句中作主语，指物，且that不能引导非限制性定语从句，所以that改成which。

考查副词。修饰动词serve，用副词，所以approximate 改成approximately。

考查v+ing。v+ing修饰物，而v+ed修饰人，这里修饰programs，所以用v+ing，learned改成learning。

考查定语从句。that we have received throughout the years. 是一个定语从句，修饰先行词the honors，关系词在从句中作宾语，所以删除from。

考查固定短语。be honored as被授予，被誉为，是固定短语，所以honoring改成honored。

考查形容词。许多其他的活动使得Chaparral中学成为一个独一无二的学习的地方。表示“其他的”，所以another改成other。

考查冠词。unique的首字母发音是辅音，所以用不定冠词a。

考查时态。表示主语现在的状态，用一般现在时，所以was改成is。

考查名词单复数。为了让学生们拥有难忘的学习实践，这些经历给学生们提供了机会。experience当经历讲时，是可数名词，且被These修饰，所以应该用可数名词的复数形式，experience experiences。

考查不定式。表示“为了……”，用不定式作目的状语，所以opportunity后加to。