Question

2．你是李华，为解决你所在的学校公益社团（public welfare society）的资金短缺问题，请给全校学生写一封募捐信，募集5000元善款．信中必须包括：
1．向全校的捐款号召．
2．你发起这一活动的理由．
3．你准备怎样使用善款的计划．
（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等任何真实信息）

Answer 1

分析 本文是应用文，根据所给提示写一封募捐信．为学校公益社团募集5000元善款．写作要点：1．向全校的捐款号召． 2．你发起这一活动的理由． 3．你准备怎样使用善款的计划．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第一人称为主．时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主．重要短语：in total （总计，总共），be faced with （面临），be short of （缺乏），lead to （导致），be in need （需要），appeal to（呼吁），have no access to（没有权利接近，获得…），due to（由于），cope with（处理），have the faith that（相信），spare no efforts（不遗余力），in advance（提前）．

解答 Dear students，
 I'm writing to you for your donation to our public welfare society--5，000 yuan in total．Faced with great difficulties currently，we are short of financial funds which directly lead to the inactiveness of the society．【高分句型】（发起这一活动的理由） Without the money，we can do nothing but imagine in our mind the help to those who are in need．Without the money，we can't be the one to give a helpful hand to those who are in need．So I'm here to appeal to all of you to get us out of the financial embarrassment．（向全校的捐款号召）
      The money we raise here will mostly go to the remote mountainous areas to fund 3 children who have no access to school due to poverty．【高分句型】We'll pay all the fees for the 3 children and get them all the study necessities such as the text books and stationery．In addition，we will spare some cash to the 3 children's family to help them cope with some financial barriers．（使用善款的计划）
     We have the faith that we should spare no efforts to help the disadvantaged．Only with your help can we perform our plan．【高分句型】Thanks in advance and we are looking forward to your help．（总结深化）
 Yours，
 Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．