Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是济南一中的李华，今年即将高中毕业。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的看法。

(1)对获得的帮助表示感谢；

(2)消除与同学之间的误会；

(3)努力学习，实现人生梦想；

(4)对学弟、学妹的建议。

注意：

(1)可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯：

(2)词数：100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。

High school is regarded as the best time in a person’s life．As a senior 3 student，it won’t take long before I graduate．___________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior three student, it won't take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.

Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."

Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达能比较真实地反映学生的生活实际，话题内容关注学生的社交生活和树立健康的人生观，具有考查的现实意义和指导意义;在语言表达上，能够让学生充分运用所学知识，毫无词汇障碍地表达自己的思想; 此外，在语言表达的设置上也有一定的伸展性，能有效地激发学生个性观点的创建。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语be regarded as 被认为。。； share with 与。。分享；Above all最重要的是；make full use of充分利用；Without their help and advice, my life would be different这个句子运用到对现在的虚拟；Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood.这个句子it做形式主语，whom引导classmates的定语从句；