Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你和外国朋友Tom约好这个周五晚上去体育馆看足球赛，但你因故不能 赴约 请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：

1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.另约时间

注意：1. 词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m so sorry to say that I can't go to watch the football match with you as scheduled this Friday night. This afternoon, I suddenly received the news that my grandfather fell down and broke his left leg. Since my father is on a business trip and won’t come back next Monday; my mother needs to look after my little sister at home, so I have to take the responsibility of taking care of my grandfather in the hospital these nights.

I have heard that there will be a match which is more exciting next Friday night. I wonder whether you are available then. If you are free, we can make an appointment to watch that football match.

Yours,

Lihua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假设你是李华，你和外国朋友Tom约好这个周五晚上去体育馆看足球赛，但你因故不能 赴约 请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.另约时间时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； suddenly（突然），responsibility（责任），available（有空的），exciting（精彩的），appointment（约定）及wonder（想知道）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。