Question

【题目】书面表达

一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。

要点：1.家庭 2.工作 3.业余生活

注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. ____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future． I think my life will be very different in ten years． I will be twenty-eight years old by then． I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child． I hope I’ll work in a computer company as a program designer． I’ll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I’ll do a good job in whatever I do． In my free time, I’ll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games．On my holidays, I’ll travel around the world． In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful．

【解析】

试题分析：一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。要点：1.家庭 2.工作 3.业余生活。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。宾语从句的使用：I hope I’ll work in a computer company as a program designer．I’ll do a good job in whatever I do．比较级的使用：my life will be much richer and more colorful．将来时态的使用使文章更加充满想象力。