Question

【题目】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Marmi, my big sister, was eagerly looking for a pup(小狗) to look after and love all her life, so she would ask Mummy many times for a pup of her own, but the answer was always no. You see, my mum is not very fond of dogs, never has been, and always says they're too big a responsibility. She's just not a dog person. Well, that didn't stop my sister from looking or hoping for a dog. She used to search online for her favourite breed(品种). Until one day Marni found some Cavapoo pups advertised for sale. She immediately showed Mummy and begged to go and see them. Not sure how my sister persuaded her, but to our surprise, Mummy said we could go and have a look at them but not to get high hopes. Marni rushed everyone in the car before Mummy changed her mind. Off we sped to the advertised breeder's house which luckily wasn't too far. We got to the house and I bet I could hear my sister's heart dancing with excitement. As we rang the doorbell, we could hear cute little barks coming from inside. We went in and saw lots of little black pups excitedly jumping around. There were other people there too, so we needed to choose one fast if you know what I mean. It was rather crowded but the breeder let us hold and cuddle(搂抱) the pups. The breeder handed a little confident pup to Marni. The little pup seemed an old friend with my sister. But after a lot of cuddles, Mummy said we had to go and would have to think about it.

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

As we were walking towards the door, the little pup followed my sister out.

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Paragraph 2:

The little pup made a mess(杂乱) of our home.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

As we were walking towards the door, the little pup followed my sister out. The moment when she just wanted to get on the car , the pup ran to her and swayed her tail. She kept licking Marmi as if to beg her to take her home. After Marmi persuaded Mummy again and again Mummy obliged to raise her . She immediately curled at my sister’s feet, gazing at everyone. Mummy told Marmi care and love are responsibilities.

Paragraph 2:

The little pup made a mess(杂乱) of our home. Each blanket had been damaged and the corner of our pillows had a jagged hole. Things became complicated. Mummy called the breeder and told him she had changed her mind . On hearing that Marmi was sad and she promised Mummy she would train her . As Marmi followed the instructions the breeder gave, the pup made strides in the months.Shenolongertriedtogetonthebed,butshedidlikesittinginthefoldingchairs.Sincethen,shehadbecomeafriendofourfamily. We were animal lovers.(175 words)

【解析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。根据所给阅读材料的内容，在所给材料后续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

通过阅读所给文章可知，作者的姐姐非常期待养一只狗，但妈妈是个不喜欢狗的人，以养狗责任大为借口不同意。姐姐并没有放弃，终于在网上找到了售卖狗的广告，在她的祈求和说明下，妈妈同意去卖狗的地方看看，他们一家来到了卖狗的地方，姐姐兴奋地抱着狗，一条又一条，最后妈妈还是犹豫了，要回去再想想才能决定。

续写部分分为两段，都给了开头，这就要求写作要符合开头的语境，要符合故事发展的逻辑，对考生也是挑战。

第一段可以写他们要离开时，小狗的反应，小狗对姐姐的依恋，祈求姐姐收养它，在姐姐的再三请求下，妈妈终于答应带狗狗回家。第二段可以写狗狗回家后，开始时由于没有受过训练，给家庭带来了一系列麻烦，情况变得复杂了，妈妈想改变主意送回小狗，姐姐决心训练小狗，让它适应家庭生活。在姐姐的训练下，小狗成为了家庭的一员。