Question

假如你是李华，你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”的活动。你们班为此组织主题班会，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈一谈你对如何创建“平安校园”的一些想法。短文应该包括下面的内容：

1．安全意识的重要性；

2．在运动中要注意安全；

3．在校内要注意人身安全；

4．同学间发生矛盾时，一定要保持冷静、理智；

5．逐步将“平安校园”活动转化为全体师生的实际行动。

注意：

1．不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节使行文连贯；

2．词数100个左右；

3．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

注释：校园安全 safety at school

My dear classmates,

There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life. Recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on.

 

 

 

 

Thanks.

 

Answer 1

My dear classmates,

There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life. Recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on.

I consider this as indeed a good practice, which will make us aware that safety should always come first in our daily life, whether when we stay at school or outside it. When we are doing sports, we should attach importance to the safety and avoid being hurt. Furthermore, when we get into trouble with our classmates, we should remain calm and avoid any form of fighting, which may only bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically.

As far as I’m concerned, I feel all the students and teachers should work hard and creatively to keep the “safety at school” activity in mind. Besides, we supposed to observe the law discipline where we are at any moment.

Thanks.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。假如你是李华，你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”的活动。你们班为此组织主题班会，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈一谈你对如何创建“平安校园”的一些想法。短文应该包括下面的内容：1．安全意识的重要性；2．在运动中要注意安全；3．在校内要注意人身安全；4．同学间发生矛盾时，一定要保持冷静、理智；5．逐步将“平安校园”活动转化为全体师生的实际行动。需要写的提纲已经给出，需要就此写一篇文章。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。

【亮点说明】I consider this as indeed a good practice, which will make us aware that safety should always come first in our daily life, whether when we stay at school or outside it.这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。Furthermore, when we get into trouble with our classmates, we should remain calm and avoid any form of fighting, which may only bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically.这里含有一个时间状语从句。

考点：提纲类书面表达