Question

【题目】假如你是一名高二年级的学生，你发现班上有些同学晚上学习到深夜。白天也不安排休息时间，但往往课堂上昏昏欲睡，有些同学饮食习惯不好，不吃早餐。请你写篇发言稿，在班会上劝同学们合理安排作息时间，注意健康饮食，保证学习好、身体好.。

要求：1.字数100字左右。 2.可适当发挥，使讲话完整通畅。

Dear classmates,

It’s a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear classmates

It’s a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today. Recently, I have found that some of our classmates study late into the night and do not spare any time to take a rest during the day either, but they often cannot help falling asleep in class. And some classmates seldom have breakfast, which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health.

In my opinion, it’s extremely important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet. We must learn to make wise use of our time, and only in this way can we keep fit and study well. I wonder if you agree with me.

Thank you for listening!

【解析】

试题分析：本文是写一封演讲稿，关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，本文的主题是劝同学们合理安排作息时间，注意健康饮食，考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系。灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】学生写作要有灵活性，同时要表现出较好的英语语言表达能力。文章使用了很好的短语和句子： study late into night学习直到晚上，spare any time to 抽出时间，In my opinion在我看来，make wise use of理智地使用，cannot help doing 不得不做某事，身不由己，found that some of our classmates study late into the night是宾语从句，which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health.是定语从句，only in this way can we keep fit and study well.是倒装句。