Question

17．假如你叫李华，你校英语报社开辟了"Reader's Voice"专栏，邀请读者针对一些热点问题发表自己的看法．请你以Should high school students study abroad during the holidays？为题，写一篇英语短文投稿．主要内容包括：
1．分析高中生出国游学的利弊；
2．阐述你对此现象的看法．
注意：1．词数100左右．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Should high school students study abroad during the holidays？
In recent years more and more high school students study abroad during the holidays．答案如下．

Answer 1

分析 本文为议论文写作．人称以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时．写作要点为：1．分析高中生出国游学的利弊；2．阐述你对此现象的看法．
重要词汇：study abroad （出国留学）；be beneficial to（有益于）；in addition（另外，此外）；communication skills（交际能力，沟通能力）；prefer A to B（A与B相比，更喜欢A）；broaden ome's horizon（开阔某人的视野）； support（支持）
高分句型：1．In addition，it is a good chance to learn new culture and make new friends，which can improve their communication skills．
                 ①it作形式主语，真正的主语为后面的不定式短语to learn new culture and make new friends；②which引导一个非限制性定语从句，关系代词which指代前一句中提到的事情．
                 2．Personally，studying abroad can help students broaden their horizons and learn to be independent．
                 非谓语动词studying abroad 在句中作主语．
                 3．But I think it will be better for them to study abroad when they are old enough to support themselves financially．
                  这句中用到了句式结构"it+be+（for sb）+to do sth"，其中it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式短语．

解答 In recent years more and more high school students study abroad during the holidays．
Studying abroad is beneficial to them．First of all，it will open their mind and enrich their experience．In addition，①it is a good chance to learn new culture and make new friends，②which can improve their communication skills（高分句型一）．However，it will take parents a lot of money to send their children abroad．And some students prefer traveling to learning．So it is a waste of money and absolutely not worthwhile．
Personally，studying abroad can help students broaden their horizons and learn to be independent（高分句型二）．But I think it will be better for them to study abroad when they are old enough to support themselves financially（高分句型三）．

点评 本题属于议论文写作，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，明确要点．2、注意将叙述、描写等手法结合到议论中，为议论提供依据．3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．