分析 英语提纲式作文为考生提供了题目与一个简单的写作提纲,将考生的写作控制在一定范畴.它要求考生紧扣题目主题,并根据提纲提示的思路和要点展开段落.这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定.因此,提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到,一个也不能遗漏.同时,为了提高文章档次,考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥.因此,该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性,能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力.考生还需要注意句子间的正确联系,注意词语的丰富和句型的多样.【亮点说明】本篇习作第一段就点明第一个要点,对父母的爱充满感激,直奔主题.第二段开始用了一个however,直接把笔锋一转,说明父母盲目的爱已经对我有所困扰.同时,使用这么一句话At this time instead of refusing their help rudely,I'd like to talk with them openly and politely.表明自己目前的真实感受.最后,I believe my parents will finally understand me.表明作者对父母的爱、信任和期待.
解答 Dear Editor,
As is known,all the parents love their children.So it is with my parents.I really feel lucky that I have such kind parents.And I deeply appreciate their love for me.
However,I have to admit sometimes they show me so much love that I feel uneasy with them.(高分句型)I think I am old enough to handle my personal affairs.At this time instead of refusing their help rudely,I'd like to talk with them openly and politely.(高分句型)I will tell them I am old enough to deal with some of my own matters on my own.I'll let them know what I need is their belief in me and their support.(高分句型)I believe my parents will finally understand me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.
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