Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I first learn to write in English, I ran into much difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate into my own language everything which I came across while I was reading. My teacher advised myself to keep a diary. I followed his advices and put down 100 words or so each day.

Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself as I was learning to express myself with simple English. One day I wrote a story and showed to my teacher. He liked it very much that he read it to the class. All said that the story was the good one. Their words were an great encouragement to me.

Answer 1

【答案】1. learn→learned 2. much→many 3. 去掉which或which→that 4. myself→me 5. advices→advice 6. talk→talking 7. with→in 8. showed后加it 9. very→so 10. the→a

【解析】本文讲述作者学英语的经历。

第一处：考查时态。由后面的ran可知，此处说的是发生在过去的事情，应该用一般过去时，故要将learn改为learned。

第二处：考查形容词。much修饰不可数名词，many修饰可数名词复数，修饰difficulties要用many，故要将much改为many。

第三处：考查定语从句。定语从句中，当先行词是不定代词时，关系代词用that而不用which，作宾语时也可以省略，故去掉which或改为that。

第四处：考查代词。此处是说老师建议我记日记，advise sb to do sth表示“建议某人做某事”，故要将myself改为me。

第五处：考查名词单复数。advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故要将advices改为advice。

第六处：考查非谓语动词。enjoy后要接动名词作宾语，表示“喜欢做某事”，故要将talk改为talking。

第七处：考查介词。介词in后接表示语言的名词表示“用……语言”，故要将with改为in。

第八处：考查代词。show sth to sb.表示“把某物展示给某人”，此处指代前面的a story，故要在showed后加it。

第九处：考查副词。so…that…为固定句型，表示“如此……以致”，故要将very改为so。

第十处：考查冠词。此处泛指一个好的故事，good是以辅音音素开头的单词，故要将good前的the改为a。