Question

16．假设你是李华，昨天收到笔友Tom的电子邮件，得知他打算来中国学习汉语，想咨询你如何学好汉语．请你给他回复一封邮件．要点如下：
你收到他的电子邮件的心情；
对他学习汉语的建议；
你随时提供帮助；
注意：1．词数100左右；
      2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
      3．开头与结尾已为你写好．
Dear Tom，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
     Looking forward to seeing you soon in China．
                                                      Yours，
                                                      Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Then add characters together to form words so that you could have a good study of phrases and sentence patterns．然后把文字组合在一起，那样你才能更好的学会各种固定用法和句型结构．
高分句型二：
Watching TV and listening to the radio are good ways to practice your listening．看电视和听收音机是练习你听力的最后办法．
句型一 so that you could have a good study of phrases and sentence patterns 该句是一个由so that引导的目的状语从句
句型二Watching TV and listening to the radio are good…该句的主语是由动名词短语充当的，由于此处用and 连接了二个并列主语，因此谓语使用了复数，通常情况下，动名词作主语谓语使用单数

解答 Dear Tom，
   I'm glad you'll come to China to learn Chinese．Chinese is very useful and interesting，and many foreigners are learning it now．
  Chinese is different from English．First，you'd better remember as many Chinese characters as possible．Then add characters together to form words so that you could have a good study of phrases and sentence patterns．（高分句型一）Next is communication．Watching TV and listening to the radio are good ways to practice your listening．（高分句型二）It's also important to do some reading and writing．（提出方法）
   If you have any questions，please tell me．I'm willing to give you help at any time．
  Looking forward to seeing you soon in China．
 Yours，
 Li Hua

点评 该书面表达为一封电子邮件，该类作文写作时应注意用准确的、简洁明了的语言将要点中的内容表达清楚即可，切忌过度啰嗦，抓不住重点的套话．