Question

假设你是校学生会成员李华，为了更好地发现和解决同学们中存在的学习压力问题，学生会以How to Deal With Study Pressure为主题于上周采访了200名高二的学生。请你根据以下调查结果写一份报告，并谈谈自己或身边的同学释放压力的有效方法。

听音乐: 35% 做运动：40%

向同学或朋友倾诉：15% 向老师或父母倾诉：10%

参考词汇： 释放 release

注意：1 词数：120个左右

2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Nowadays, more and more Senior Three students are getting stressed in their studies. In order to find some effective ways to release their stress, a survey was carried out last week. Altogether, 200 students were interviewed, and the results are as follows.

About 40% of the students let out their stress by doing sports. They play football, go for a swim, or play ping-pong, for instance. Meanwhile, another 35 of the students release their stress by listening to different kinds of music. About 15% of them like to tell their problems to their classmates or friends. They feel much better after having a talk with them. Only 10% of the students choose to discuss their problems with their parents or teachers.

I’m always under pressure, too. I think a conversation with our parents or teachers is helpful, and that taking exercise can help us to relax when we are under pressure.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据调查结果写一份报告，并谈谈释放压力的有效方法。词数在120词左右；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：

范文详细描述了调查的结果，并进行了适当的拓展；范文还使用了宾语从句、时间状语从句等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：宾语从句that taking exercise can help us to relax；时间状语从句when we are under pressure等，具备一定的语法功底，也使作文句式多样；

搭配方面：more and more, in order to, carry out, let out, for instance, choose to do等，范文使用了较多的短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用altogether, and, meanwhile, too等词来衔接句子和段落，使语句通顺、衔接紧密；也使表达变得更有条理。

考点：材料作文