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  假设你是李华，福建省某中学高中学生，今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为WATER FOR LIFE“的交流活动。请你以参访代表的身份，根据以下图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。

 

注意：

根据图片的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯；

开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数；

文中不能出现考生的具体信息；

词数：120左右

参考词汇：短缺 shortage ; 资源 reaource

Ladies and gentlemen,

  Good morning, I’m Li Hua from Fujian,China,It’s my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.___________________________________________________________                                                                   That’s all. Thank you.

           

Answer 1

One possible version

Ladies and gentlemen,

Good morning. I’m Li Hua from Fujian, China. It’s my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.

As we know, the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming, environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population. Therefore, it’s high time we did something about it.

Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use. Secondly, new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water. Thirdly, we must stop water opllution by law. Last but not least, it’s everyone’s responsibility to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life.

In conclusion, people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically.

That’s all. Thank you.

 

解析:

【思路点拨】试题为应用文中的发言稿，是半开放性的试题。对此试题的写作，应从以下几个方面进行关注：一：试题给出的图片中的内容要点提示是我们写作的重点，应围绕其展开，并注意文章的逻辑性和段落层次性；二：注意写作时的身份限制，切记不能透露自身的具体信息；三：发言稿要有总结，且一定要简练有力，切中要点。

【范文点评】文章要点齐全，写作层次清楚，很好的将试题提供的信息进行了展示，并进行了总结。第二段引起话题，突出重点，如Therefore, it’s high time we did something about it. ；第三段按照提示层层将试题所要求知识点展开，显得条理清楚，叙述合理得当；第四段总结言简意赅，紧扣主题。同时，文章还注重了句式的多样化，如：简单句，并列句，及非限制性定语从句的使用等。当然，本文在过渡上衔接自然，尤其是一些过渡词的使用，如：Therefore，Firstly，In conclusion等，显示了较强的语言功底和运用能力。