Question

7．请用英语写一篇100个词左右的短文，记述一件发生在你身上（边）的助人为乐的事迹．要求如下：
1．描述事情经过；   2．谈谈你的感想．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们记述一件发生在身上（边）的助人为乐的事迹，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时，内容要点包括：描述事情经过；谈谈你的感想．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为描述事情经过．第二部分为谈谈自己的感想．
重点短语与句型：
have difficulty in doing sth 做某事方面有困难
Much to my joy令我非常开心
be willing to do sth乐意做某事
高分句型一：Suddenly I noticed an old dustman collecting rubbish thrown about by the visitors．此句用了过去分词thrown作后置定语
高分句型二：Dog-tired as I was，I felt really happy此句adj+as+主谓，"尽管…"倒装句

解答 Last Saturday，some of my classmates and I went to the Qiandao lake for some refreshment．Suddenly I noticed an old dustman collecting rubbish thrown about by the visitors．（高分句型一）He was apparently having great difficulty collecting some small items，especially cigarette butts．An idea struck me．Why not help him collect litter？Much to my joy，all my classmates agreed and were willing to help．So we worked hard together with the dustman and collected lots of rubbish．Then we parted and waved farewell to the thankful dustman．（描述事情经过）
      Dog-tired as I was，I felt really happy（高分句型二）．As the saying goes，helping hands are more sacred than praying lips．I truly believe we'd have a more harmonious society if everybody took action．What a fine deed!（谈谈自己的感想）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．