Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit for it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river. It’s such beautiful a place! We can hear birds singing happy all round. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have a lot of spare time to visit the area or have fun. I am sure it will be a unforgettable experience. If you have an interest in it, write to me soon

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】1.took

2. have后加been

3. 去掉needed 后的in

4. joining

5. close

6. so

7. happily

8. which

9. and

10. an

【解析】1.took考查时态，由时间状语last summer可知发生在过去用一般过去时态，故将take改为took。

2. have后加been考查语态，根据句意：我被告知今年需要多加一个工人。用被动语态，故在have后加been。

3. 去掉needed 后的in考查时间状语，今年this year，故去掉needed后的in。

4. joining考查句型，how about doing something做某事怎么样，故将join改为joining。

5. close根据句意：露营在小山脚下靠近河流。故将closed改为close。

6. so考查副词，so+形容词+a+可数名词单数，故将such改为so。

7. happily考查副词作状语，鸟儿高兴地歌唱sing happily，故将happy改为happily。

8. which考查非限制性定语从句，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，故将that改为which。

9. and考查连词，根据句意：因此我们有更多的空余时间参观这一区域，并且获得快乐。并列关系，故将or改为and。

10. an考查不定冠词，interest是以元音读音开始的名词，故将a改为an。