Question

9．假设你叫李华，你的朋友Joan新到你班来学习．她想了解班主任李老师的一些情况．请用100字左右的文章来介绍李老师的情况．内容要点如下：
1李老师年近四十，1986年任教以来，工作一贯努力，曾多次受到表扬
2他知识丰富，教学有方，上课生动有趣，学生爱听他的课．
3他与学生关系融洽，对学生要求严格．经常鼓励大家勤奋学习．在他的帮助之下，大家进步很快．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇Email的书写．从题文来看，这算是一篇叙事类的书面表达考生只需将内容精准无误的翻译出来就可以拿到基本分了，当然，正确的Email格式与漂亮的语句、高级的词汇可为学生带来更多的分．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：本文将内容中的每个提示单独分段，使得结构清晰．文中时态运用准确，介词也群涌精准，例如came to，be praised for，is very strict with等，还有一些好的句子结构，比如With his help，we've made much progress 中with结构的运用，is not only our good teacher，but also our good friend 中not only..but also 句型结构的运用．
All these years he has been working very hard，and many times he has been praised for his good work．（高分句型一）
He is getting on well with us，but he is very strict with us．（高分句型二）
Mr．Li is not only our good teacher，but also our good friend．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Joan，
      Our teacher，Mr．Li，is now nearly forty years old．He came to our school in 1986．All these years he has been working very hard，and many times he has been praised for his good work．（高分句型一）He has much knowledge and is good at teaching．All of us enjoy his lessons．They are lively and interesting．He is getting on well with us，but he is very strict with us．（高分句型二） He often encourages us to study hard．With his help，we've made much progress．Mr．Li is not only our good teacher，but also our good friend．（高分句型三）We all love and respect him．
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．