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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

High school is a time that we may meet many good teachers. When I was in Senior One, I met my chemistry teacher calling John, who devoted himself in teaching. He tried his best to make her classes lively. He usually made good preparation for the lessons and was strict with us, too. Whenever we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correcting them. I was used to be poor in chemistry. He often helps me with my studies very patient. Because of his help, I made rapid progress and caught up with the class. He was always very kind to every student. As experienced teacher, he was respected and loved by all the students.

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【解析】

本文介绍了作者在高一时，遇到的一位受所有同学尊敬和爱戴的好老师。

1.考查定语从句。when we may meet many good teachers. 是一个定语从句，关系词a time在从句中作时间状语，所以用关系副词when，第一句：that改为when。

2.考查过去分词作后置定语。句意：当我在高一的时候，我遇到了我的化学老师约翰，他致力于教学。此处是过去分词作后置定语，故把calling改成called。

3.考查固定搭配。句意：当我在高一的时候，我遇到了我的化学老师约翰，他致力于教学。固定搭配：devote---to---“致力于---”，故把in改成to。

4.考查代词。约翰老师是男的，所以第四句：her改为his。

5.考查固定用法。make good preparations for做好充分准备,是固定用法，所以第五句：preparation改为preparations。

6.考查固定句型。ask sb. to do sth. 让某人做某事，是固定句型，所以correcting改为correct。

7.考查固定用法。句意：我以前化学很差。used to do sth.表示过去经常、习惯做某事，故把was去掉。

8.考查时态。发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以第八句helps改为helped。

9.考查副词。修饰动词helped，用副词，所以patient改为patiently。

10.考查冠词。作为一名有经验的教师，他受所有同学尊敬和爱戴。泛指“一名有经验的教师”，且experienced的首字母发音是元音，所以第十句在As后加an。