Question

20．请根据如图写一篇100-120个词的短文．你的短文应包括下列要点：

1．简要描述图画内容；
2．说明图画含义；
3．你的看法．
Birthday Celebration
As is shown in the picture above，___________________________________________________
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Answer 1

分析 本文是看图作文．从图中我们可以看见爸爸妈妈在家准备好给儿子过生日，而孩子却在抱怨说："都什么年代了!还有谁在家过生日？"这反映了现在存在的一个社会现象：孩子过生日有一种攀比情况，很多学生过生日都去饭店请客，比较铺张浪费．一般看图作文，出题者都要求学生描绘这幅画的内容，然后说出反映什么样的社会现象，说明这种现象产生的原因，以及自己的观点．，这篇也不例外．我们可以分三段来写，第一段描绘图的内容以及其反映的现象，第二段说明产生的原因，第三段写自己的观点．  
高分句式：Nowadays，like the boy in thepicture，many  teenagers think it becomesa fashion to celebrate their birthdays in the restaurants，receiving variousgifts from parents and friends．
当今，像图中的小男孩一样，很多青少年认为去餐馆庆祝生日并从父母和朋友那接收礼物是一种时尚．句中使用了现在分词receiving various gifts from parents and friends．作伴随状语．

解答 Birthday Celebration    
 As is shown in the picture，the parents have  prepared a special caketo show their love for their son on his birthday．Apparently，the son is not  satisfied，complaining："Who would have his birthday celebrated at home in this day and age？"，which really surprises them．
 Nowadays，like the boy in thepicture，many  teenagers think it becomesa fashion to celebrate their birthdays in the restaurants，receiving variousgifts from parents and friends．What‟s more，they can have fun by drinking，singing  and dancing．
    Personally，I think it can be done in amore  meaningful way．Birthday is much more than an occasion to receive gifts．It is also a time for us  to express thanks to our parents in return for  their love．

点评 要写好英语的看图作文首先，要根据题目所要求及画面展示确定好题材与体裁．其次，要确定好行文的人称与时态基调．再次，要在句与句以及段与段之间加一些表转折、递进和因果等关系的关联词与过渡句，使文章前后照应，行文流畅．写作步骤如下：
第一段 简述图片内容．As is shown in the picture，…，提出现象，阐述中心论点
第二段 分述自己的观点，要有条理、用 first of all/in the first place，in the next place，last but notleast 等短语条理清晰，思路分明
第三段 重申主题号召或者呼吁等等