Question

1．假如你是吴东，你的朋友李明因肥胖而感到烦恼，请用英语写一篇100-120个词的一封信，就健康饮食，体育锻炼，自信等方面提出自己的建议．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据提示信息你的朋友李明因肥胖而感到烦恼，请用英语写一篇100-120个词的一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：就健康饮食，体育锻炼，自信等方面提出自己的建议，2、要在恰当的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：as a result of由于…的原因；In fact事实上；build up建造；Above all首先；In addition另外；
I am writing to tell you what you should do to recover you health．（高分句型一）
Above all，you should have a wholesome diet by eating more vegetables and fruit because they rich in vitamins and fibre．（高分句型二）
Eat less cheese and chocolate which contains much sugar and fat which will make you fat．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Wu Dong，
      I am sorry to hear that you are ill as a result of being fat．You shouldn't have eaten so much food．In fact，you'd better do more sports and build up your body．I am writing to tell you what you should do to recover you health．（高分句型一）
      Above all，you should have a wholesome diet by eating more vegetables and fruit because they rich in vitamins and fibre．（高分句型二）Eat less cheese and chocolate which contains much sugar and fat which will make you fat．（高分句型三）In addition，you should exercise regularly and have enough sleep．Don't be too tired．What's more，keeping happy and a balanced diet are as important as sports．
       I look forward to seeing a heathy  Li Ming soon．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Wu Dong

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．