Question

12．假如你是一只濒临灭绝的华南虎，面对恶劣的生活环境，你决定给人类写一封信，希望能提高人类保护动物的意识．信的内容如下：
（1）过去的美好时光：绿色的森林，清新的空气，自由的生活；
（2）人类对自己和家人的伤害：（1）过度捕猎；
（2）破坏栖息地；
（3）终日生活在饥饿和担惊受怕中．
（3）恳请人类保护动物，与它们和谐相处．
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear man，
I'm the South China tiger，an endangered animal．I'm writing to tell you something about my poor living environment which results from you cruel activities．
Looking back，how wonderful it was for us to enjoy the green forest，the fresh air and the free life．However，you hunt too much，decreasing the number of us．Besides，you cut down the trees，wh ich destroyed our habitat．It is your human activities that push us to the edge of extinction．My famil y and I are living in hunger and fear all day long．
I strongly appeal to you to protect us but not to hurt us．It's our hope that we can live in harmony with each other．
Looking forward to your concern for us!
Yours，
South China tiger．

Answer 1

分析 这是一只濒临灭绝的华南虎给人类写一封信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明书信目的；二过去的美好时光以及现在人类对自己和家人的伤害；三恳请人类保护动物，与动物们和谐相处．
高分句型：
1．I'm writing to tell you something about my poor living environment which results from you cruel activities．句子里which引导定语从句，代指先行词 my poor living environment； results from 表示"由于"．
我写信是告诉你，由于你们残忍的行为造成我们的环境恶化．
2．It is your human activities that push us to the edge of extinction句子里It is 和that构成强调句式，强调主语your human activities；the edge of extinction表示"灭绝的边缘"．
是你们人类的活动使我们到了灭绝的边缘．

解答 Dear man，
       I'm the South China tiger，an endangered animal． I'm writing to tell you something about my poor living environment which results from you cruel activities．【高分句型一】（点明书信目的）
       Looking back，how wonderful it was for us to enjoy the green forest，the fresh air and the free life．However，you hunt too much，decreasing the number of us．Besides，you cut down the trees，wh ich destroyed our habitat．It is your human activities that push us to the edge of extinction．【高分句型二】My famil y and I are living in hunger and fear all day long．（过去的美好时光以及现在人类对自己和家人的伤害）
       I strongly appeal to you to protect us but not to hurt us．It's our hope that we can live in harmony with each other．（恳请人类保护动物，与动物们和谐相处）
       Looking forward to your concern for us!
Yours，
South China tiger

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作的第一步是审题，我们要弄清楚该用的人称，时态以及要点，然后列出提纲；根据提纲写出草稿，改正错误以后，才能写作答题纸上．