Question

【题目】假如你是新华中学学生会主席李华，学校安排你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师Peter推荐（recommend)一名学生助理(assistant)请根据以下要点给他写封推荐信。

1.欢迎Peter的到来。2.推荐韩梅为学生助手；3.韩梅的基本情况（17岁，高二学生）

4.韩梅的优势（电脑技术，沟通能力，英语水平等)。

注意：1词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数)；

2.可根据内容适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua,

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Looking forward to your coming.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union of Xinhua Middle School. It’s great to hear that you are coming to teach in our school next semester.

I was asked to write to you to recommend Han Mei, a Senior 2 student, aged 17, to be your assistant. Han Mei is a diligent girl, who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. What’s more, she is expert at spoken English and ready to help others in need. I’m sure she can be helpful in your work and life in China. If you have any questions about it, please contact me.

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文写作。需要注意以下要点。

（1） 仔细审题。明确写作要求，抓住写作要点。

（2） 拟写草稿。在审题的基础上，拟写草稿，注意对关键要点覆盖全面的同时还要注意内容的丰富。

（3） 运用高级词汇和句子格式。在写作过程中要运用一些高级词汇，还要注意运用一些从句，使得句子不再单一。

【范文亮点】

宾语从句。It’s great to hear that you are coming to teach in our school next semester.

定语从句。Han Mei is a diligent girl, who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others.

条件状语从句。If you have any questions about it, please contact me.