Question

【题目】你是李华，你很烦恼。最近，每天早晚，你们小区广场上都有很多人在跳广场舞，持续时间长且噪音大，给你和小区里其他人带来了很多的不便……请你给小区委员会领导写封信，反映现象及其导致的不便（要求涉及生活、学习和工作等方面）并提出合理建议。

注意：

1、词数120左右；

2、短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇： 广场舞 square dance 组织者organizers

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I am writing to tell you something about the people doing the square dance in our community, which has made me terribly upset.

Recently, every morning and evening, many people gather to dance in our community square :which does help to keep healthy. However, the long-time dancing and the noise pollution caused by the loudspeaker really bring about unbearable inconveniences.

We can’t rest or sleep well. As a result, the students are not only late for school but also sleepy in class, and the workers are easily tired out while working.

Here are some suggestions to solve the problem. They are supposed either to shorten the dancing time and reduce the music noise or to make another choice of dancing places. Only in this way can they have fun and let others enjoy life.

Would you please communicate with the organizers about what I said?

Best wishes

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文使用第一人称和一般现在时的时态。要点：1.说明问题，小区广场上都有很多人在跳广场舞，持续时间长且噪音大，给你和小区里其他人带来了很多的不便。2.提出建议；介绍具体的建议，例如缩减跳舞时间，调低音乐声音等。如果可能，尽量多使用高级句式和词汇。