Question

2．如图为上海市城市污染源比例柱状图．请你简要描述图表内容，并就城市空气污染的状况提出你的改进建议．
注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级、学校等真实信息．

Answer 1

分析 本文为表格作文．
写作目的为：就上海空气污染的状况提出你的改进建议．
写作要点为：1，动车造成的空气污染；2，工厂造成的空气污染；3，吸烟；4，其他．

解答 With the development of industry，air pollution is getting more and more serious．In Shanghai，many people suffer from different kinds of illness because of air pollution．
Air pollution is caused by the following reasons．About half of the problem is caused by vehicles．There are more and more cars and buses on the road，which give off poisonous gases.35% of air pollution is caused by factories．Another factor is smoking．Smoking does harm to others'health as well as to that of the smokers．Besides，about 10% of air pollution is caused by other reasons．
We should take some measures to fight against pollution．New fuel can be used to take the place of gas．We can plant more trees，grass and flowers．All in all，if everybody realizes the importance of environment and does something to stop pollution，the problem will be solved．

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