Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jack打算暑假期间来中国体验生活，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括:

1. 表示欢迎 2. 推荐内容 3. 你的祝愿

参考词汇:recommend(v.) 推荐

注意: 1.词数100词左右;

2.文章中不得出现真实学校与班级名称;

3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

How is everything going ? Knowing you are going to visit China in your summer holiday to experience Chinese culture and life, I am glad to welcome you and reply to what you ask for.

To make your trip more unforgettable, I’ll make some recommendations.First of all, Beijing, the capital city of China, is the place where you can fully experience Chinese culture. Besides, if time permits, you had better experience Beijing Opera in Beijing Grand Theatre in person. Meanwhile, some Chinese food such as Beijing Roast Duck, the Hot Pot, can’t be missed because it is quite different from that in your country.

I believe you will have a wonderful trip during your stay in China. Looking forward to your early coming.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，给朋友推荐怎么在中国体验生活。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.表达问候，表明写信目的。

2.具体内容：

1）表示欢迎

2）推荐内容

3) 你的祝愿

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be glad to; reply to; ask for; first of all; in person; such as; different from; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. Knowing you are going to visit China in your summer holiday to experience Chinese culture and life, I am glad to welcome you and reply to what you ask for.

2. To make your trip more unforgettable, I’ll make some recommendations.

3. Beijing, the capital city of China, is the place where you can fully experience Chinese culture.

4. If time permits, you had better experience Beijing Opera in Beijing Grand Theatre in person.

5. Some Chinese food such as Beijing Roast Duck, the Hot Pot, can’t be missed because it is quite different from that in your country.

6. I believe you will have a wonderful trip during your stay in China.

7. Looking forward to your early coming.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改