Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是李华，是我校一位高三学生。最近你收到来自友好学校朋友Tom的邀请，请你下个周去他们学校参加文化交流活动并介绍中国的传统绘画。但是你和其他高三学生一样在忙于准备期末考试，不得不谢绝他的邀请，请根据下面的要点给Tom写一封回信。

要点：

1. 谢绝Tom的邀请；

2. 说明你的理由；

3. 推荐你的同学Mary参加，并说明原因。

注意：

1. 词数为100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 信的开头已为你写好(不计入你所写词数)。

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for your invitation.

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Best wishes.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for your invitation. I’d like to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends, but I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t.

The reason is that I, together with my classmates, am busy preparing myself for the coming final examination. I strongly recommend my friend Mary, who is the most suitable choice to take my place next week. She began to learn painting at an early age and has a good knowledge of traditional Chinese painting, which, combined with her active personality and perfect spoken English, will help make your activity a success.

Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文要求根据李华最近收到来自友好学校朋友Tom的邀请，下个周去他们学校参加文化交流活动并介绍中国的传统绘画。但是由于忙于准备期末考试，不得不谢绝他的邀请，要求给Tom写一封回信。要点包括：1.谢绝Tom的邀请；2.说明你的理由；3.推荐你的同学Mary参加，并说明原因。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：宾语从句that I can’t. 表语从句that I, together with my classmates, am busy preparing myself for the coming final examination. 定语从句who is the most suitable choice to take my place next week.和which will help make your activity a success. 过去分词combined with her active personality and perfect spoken English和caused by my absence. 还运用了together with my classmates, am busy preparing，has a good knowledge of等词汇。