Question

【题目】玫瑰市上星期发生强烈的地震，灾情严重，各地纷纷向玫瑰市伸出援手。学校将举办一场慈善义卖会,为灾区人民募集善款。假定你是班长李华，请你写一封书面通知，通知全班同学参加，要点包括：
1).活动背景：玫瑰市受灾情况介绍
2).活动目的：通过义卖筹集善款帮助受灾人民
3).内容：慈善物品拍卖，义演。
4).时间:本周六下午14:30
5).地点：学校操场。
注意：⑴须包括以上主要内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；
⑵词数：120左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
⑶参考词汇：玫瑰市 Rose City 慈善义卖会 charity bazaar 义演 charity performance
Dear classmates,

Answer 1

【答案】Dear classmates,

I'm here to announce that there is going to be charity bazaar held by our school, which is meant for the people seriously afflicted by the earthquake that happened the week before in Rose City.

As is known to us all, the earthquake has flattened numerous houses and cracked countless roads, resulting in a formidable situation where a large number of people are reduced to bitter sufferings. It is urgent for us to do something for them. Therefore, we plan to hold a charity bazaar where various items donated by us students will be on sale to raise money for the people in need. There is going to be a singing concert as well. It is on the playground at 2:30 pm this Saturday that we will gather together to make this meaningful event happen.

Come and join us. We would be glad to see you then.

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