Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
VII. Proof —reading
Mike called his wife to tell him that he had got two film tickets. He asked her to go and meet him outside the theatre. Mike’s wife is very glad because they hadn’t seen a film for quite long time. She met her husband in the entrance to the cinema. Mike took out his wallet to get the tickets, so they were not there. He then tried his pockets, but the tickets were not there, too. Mike looked very worrying. “What’s the matter?” asked his wife. “Well,” Mike explained, “I remember that I did with them. I put it on the desk and forgot to pick them up before leaving for the office!”

Answer 1

【小题1】him—her
【小题2】is—was
【小题3】quite a long time
【小题4】in—at
【小题5】so—but
【小题6】too—either
【小题7】worrying—worried
【小题8】that—what
【小题9】it—them
【小题10】for去掉

解析试题分析：迈克给妻子打电话说他有两张电影票，让她去电影院外等他。因为很长时间没看电影了，于是他妻子就高高兴兴去了。但是当到了电影院门口的时候，迈克却怎么也找不到电影票了，原来他把票落到办公室的桌子上了。
【小题1】考查代词用法。 Mike called his wife to tell him 迈克给妻子打电话，所以应该是告诉她事情，所以把him改为her。
【小题2】考查动词时态。Mike’s wife is very glad 根据语境判断短文是叙述过去的事情，所以把is改为was。
【小题3】考查冠词用法。they hadn’t seen a film for quite long time.固定短语quite a long time“相当长的时间”，所以long前面加a。
【小题4】考查介词用法。 She met her husband in the entrance to the cinema 在入口处应该用介词at，所以把in改为at。
【小题5】考查连词用法。 so they were not there.根据语境可知前后两句话是转折关系，所以把so改为but。【小题6】考查副词用法。 but the tickets were not there, too.根据词的用法可知，too用在肯定句末尾，而在否定句中表示“也不”，要用either，所以把 too改为either。
【小题7】考查形容词用法。Mike looked very worrying.此处表达Mike的心情，要用—ed结尾的形容词，把worrying改为worried。
【小题8】考查连接词。I remember that I did with them 从结构可知remember后是宾语从句，that引导宾语从句时不做成分，而动词did缺少主语，所以把that改为what。
【小题9】考查代词用法。 I put it on the desk 根据上文可知他们拿到的是两张票，所以把it改为them。
【小题10】考查动词短语。 before leaving for the office . leave for sp“动身去某地”而此处指的是离开办公室之前，所以去掉介词for。
考点：考查短文改错。