Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的朋友王雨在写给你的来信中谈到她由于性格内向，在社交场合不知如何与人寒暄交谈所以深感苦恼。请你用英语写一封 120 词左右的回信。信中需包含以下内容：

1. 表示对朋友的安慰；

2. 告知对方你也曾经有过类似问题并克服了；

3. 就如何解决此问题提出两点建议。

注意：回信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总字数。

参考词汇：introverted personality （内向性格）

Dear Wang Yu,

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Yu,

It's always a pleasure to hear from you.

You mentioned that you have been troubled by your introverted personality and that you have no clue how to start a conversation with people during social occasions. Well, just relax because I can guarantee you that you are not the only person who is faced with this problem, I've been there too! I was too shy to talk with people before but I tried my best to overcome my shyness and finally I helped myself out. So here I want to offer you some suggestions:

Firstly, you should do a little advance planning, prepare some low-risk openers ready. Secondly, use the AAA model we learned from our textbook so that you can quickly find some common ground with the person you are talking with.

I do hope my suggestions will help!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封回信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封回信；你的朋友王雨在写给你的来信中谈到她由于性格内向，在社交场合不知如何与人寒暄交谈，所以深感苦恼，你要在信中表达对他的安慰，告知他你也曾经有过类似问题并克服了，为他提供如何解决此问题的两点建议；时态应为一般过去时、一般现在时，使用第一人称。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：introverted personality （性格内向），social occasion（社交场合），conversation（交谈），overcome（克服）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句You mentioned that you have been troubled by your introverted personality and that you have no clue how to start a conversation with people during social occasions.；原因状语从句和定语从句Well, just relax because I can guarantee you that you are not the only person who is faced with this problem, I've been there too!；连词firstly，secondly的运用使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。