Question

2．请你根据提示并结合生活中的一个事例，就"包容"这一话题，用英语写一篇短文．
There's no denying that forgiveness  is  a noble quality．With forgiveness people will live in a harmonious way； with forgiveness，people can overcome any difficulty； with forgiveness，…
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语，
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合生活中的一个事例；
④文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数为120左右．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Forgiveness is what I learned from my teacher，which has had a great influence on my growth
宽恕是我从老师那里学到的，它对我的成长有很大的影响．
高分句型二：
It was forgiveness rather than punishment that changed Tom．
是原谅而不是惩罚改变了汤姆．

解答 Forgiveness is what I learned from my teacher，which has had a great influence on my growth（高分句型一）．
     Two years ago，I，together with Tom who was regarded as the best basketball player in my class，took part in the basketball final of our school on behalf of our class．With only 20 seconds left，our team still took a lead by two points．To our delight，the ball was in Tom's hand!Had Tom passed it in time，we would certainly have won．But Tom chose to break through．Suddenly，our rival stole the ball，and shot a three-pointer!After the match，we all demanded the teacher fire Tom．But our teacher told us to forgive him，saying forgiveness was a good medicine for some diseases．After that，Tom did learn the importance of good teamwork．
     It was forgiveness rather than punishment that changed Tom（高分句型二）．

点评 本书面表达为议论文，议论文是对某现象或观点进行点评．写作时，应注意按提出、分析、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排文章结构，使用足够的论据来分层次论证自己的观点．