Question

【题目】假定你是李华，当前在伦敦的孔子学院（Confucius Institute）做志愿者。你的英国朋友Henry对孔子特别感兴趣，请你写封邮件邀请他参观孔子学院，要点如下：

1.简述孔子及中国文化在世界上的影响；

2.告知参观时间：11月6日（本周六）上午8点；

3.介绍参加活动：汉语班, 剪纸, 书法。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.参考词汇: 剪纸：paper-cutting

书法：calligraphy

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Henry,

I am glad to know that you are keen on Confucius and Chinese culture. Confucius, whose ideas have a great impact on Chinese culture, is considered the greatest ancient educator. As an increasing number of foreigners want to learn Chinese culture, the Confucius Institutes are set up in many foreign countries.

Since I am a volunteer working in the Confucius Institute in London, I’d like to invite you to visit it at 8:00 am on Saturday, November 6.

During our visit, we can attend some Chinese classes, which will be followed by some activities such as paper-cutting and Chinese calligraphy.

I sincerely hope that you will accept this invitation. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇电子邮件：当前在伦敦的孔子学院（Confucius Institute）做志愿者。你的英国朋友Henry对孔子特别感兴趣，请你写封邮件邀请他参观孔子学院，要点如下：简述孔子及中国文化在世界上的影响；告知参观时间：11月6日（本周六）上午8点；介绍参加活动：汉语班, 剪纸, 书法。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：Confucius Institute（孔子学院）；have a great impact on Chinese culture（对中国文化有一个大的影响）；in many foreign countries（在很多外国国家）；paper-cutting and Chinese calligraphy（剪纸和中国书法）

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。本文应该用第一人称，现在时为主。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封电子邮件，格式正确，内容齐全，文章结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。I am glad to know that you are keen on Confucius and Chinese culture.文中使用that引导的宾语从句；Confucius, whose ideas have a great impact on Chinese culture, is considered the greatest ancient educator.句中whose引导非限制性定语从句；Since I am a volunteer working in the Confucius Institute in London,文中使用since引导的原因状语从句；During our visit, we can attend some Chinese classes, which will be followed by some activities such as paper-cutting and Chinese calligraphy.句中which引导非限制性定语从句。