Question

10．假如你是红星中学高三学生李华．你的英国朋友Jim得知你要参加CCTV《朗读者》节目的录制，来信询问相关情况．请你给Jim回信．内容包括：
1．你朗读的内容；
2．你选择上述内容的原因；
3．上述内容对你的影响．
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，
Dear Jim，
How is it going？Thank you for your support on my upcoming attendance in the CCTV program The Reader．
The book I have chosen is"Fu Lei's Family Letters"in which he shared his view about art and life in order to guide his son．There are two reasons why I've decided to read one of his letters to the audience nationwide．Firstly，you can feel the profound fatherly love and his efforts to guide the next generation，which I believe will touch the youngsters like me．Besides，many traditional virtues，such as integrity，can be found in his works，which can inspire students like us．
The book has an immense influence on me．Actually，it is this book that changed me from a troubled teen to a caring son．Besides，the wisdom in the book helps me shape a positive attitude towards life and future．Thus，it came to my mind the moment I got the invitation．
That's all about it．I hope my introduction can be of some help．Is there any book that also plays an important role in your life？I'm looking forward to your reply!
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）There are two reasons why I've decided to read one of his letters to the audience nationwide．
该句型使用了why引导的定语从句，修饰先行词two reasons；
（高分句型二）many traditional virtues，such as integrity，can be found in his works，which can inspire students like us．
which引导非限制性定语从句，代指前面的many traditional virtues；
（高分句型三）it is this book that changed me from a troubled teen to a caring son．
该句使用了强调句，即it is this book that…强调主语this book；
过渡词使用较好：Firstly；Besides；Actually；Thus；
高级词汇：profound深远的；have an immense influence on对…有影响；shape塑造；be of some help有帮助的；

解答 Dear Jim，
    How is it going？Thank you for your support on my upcoming attendance in the CCTV program The Reader．
    The book I have chosen is"Fu Lei's Family Letters"in which he shared his view about art and life in order to guide his son．（高分句型一）There are two reasons why I've decided to read one of his letters to the audience nationwide．Firstly，you can feel the profound fatherly love and his efforts to guide the next generation，which I believe will touch the youngsters like me．Besides，（高分句型二）many traditional virtues，such as integrity，can be found in his works，which can inspire students like us．（介绍朗读的内容）
    The book has an immense influence on me．Actually，（高分句型三）it is this book that changed me from a troubled teen to a caring son．Besides，the wisdom in the book helps me shape a positive attitude towards life and future．Thus，it came to my mind the moment I got the invitation．（朗读该书的原因）
    That's all about it．I hope my introduction can be of some help．Is there any book that also plays an important role in your life？I'm looking forward to your reply!
                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                          Li Hua

点评 这类文章书写时，需要做到脉络清晰，并且观点明确，理由得当．首先审题，明白文章的话题主要是什么，也就是整篇文章的中心，其次就是要抓住题目给出的主要内容，这也就是给文章的主要脉络进行了定格，所以这类文章在书写时，对于预言逻辑能力的运用能力，词汇和句型的使用能力，文章连接的高要求较高，同时学生在书写时，对于字数也要进行适当的控制．