Question

假如你校和加拿大某中学是友好学校，对方校刊来信了解你校的选修课开设情况。请根据下表提供的内容，用英语写一篇短文，向对方介绍这一情况。(选修课optional course) （ 120词左右）

课程门类	上课时间	学生对课程的看法	学生建议
六种：书法、英语口语、音乐欣赏、电影欣赏、摄影和游泳，学生可任选	每周二、五下午 4：30～6：00	很有趣；能学到许多课外知识；有实践机会 … …	增加选修课；减少作业量；多组织参观、了解社会的活动 … …

Answer 1

This term our school is offering six optional courses for students to choose from. The courses include Handwriting, Spoken English, Music Appreciation, Movie Appreciation, Photographing and Swimming. They are given from 4:30 pm to 6:00 pm on Tuesday and Friday.
Students take great interest in the optional courses. They say they have learned a lot that can’t be learned in the textbooks. At the same time, many chances have been given to them to practice what they have learned in class. Therefore, the students hope more optional courses will be offered in the future and that more trips and visits will be organized so that they can learn more about what is going on outside the school.

试题分析：这是一篇表格类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，结合具体内容要用一般现在时，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。象many chances have been given to them to practice what they have learned in class.这是what引导宾语从句，特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是时间的表达法。from 4:30 pm to 6:00 pm on Tuesday and Friday.
点评：本文属于表格类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。