Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误仅限1词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

With the progress of society, the volunteer spirit has spread all over a country. More and more people are willing to be volunteer and take part in volunteer activities. Get involved in volunteer work means a lot to our society. Firstly, you show loving care for others when you are doing voluntary service. You pass love and civilization on to others with their volunteer work, and make others feel that there are always people care about them. This made our society more harmonious. Secondly, people whom you help may influenced by your good deeds and follow your lead. In a result, all people may help and care about each other, or the world will become a better place to live in. Since volunteer work is so meaningfully, we should call on more people to take part in it actively.

Answer 1

【答案】1. a country - the country

2. volunteer - volunteers

3. Get - Getting

4. their - your

5. care - caring

6. made - makes

7. influenced - be influenced

8. In - As

9. or - and

10. meaningfully - meaningful

【解析】第一处：考查冠词，由句意：随着社会进步，志愿者精神已经传遍这个国家，可知，“国家”应该是特指，而非泛指，故将a改为the.

第二处：考查名词单复数，句意：越来越多的人愿意成为志愿者，主语是复数，所以volunteer应该加s,故将volunteer改为volunteers.

第三处：考查动词-ing形式，句意：参与到志愿者的工作对我们的社会来说意义重大，观察句子结构，“Get involved in volunteer work”部分作主语，动词原形不可以作主语，动词-ing形式可以作主语，故将Get改为Getting.

第四处：考查形容词性物主代词，句意：你通过志愿者工作，把爱和文明传递给他人，主语是you,所以志愿者工作也应该是“你的”，故将their改为your.

第五处：考查动词-ing形式，句意：并且让其他人觉得总会有人关心着他们，这里“care about them”作定语修饰people,动词原形care不可以作定语，故要将care改为表示主动的caring.

第六处：考查时态，句意：这让我们的社会变得更加和谐，本篇短文通篇用的都是一般现在时，故将made改为makes.

第七处：考查语态，根据句意：你所帮助的人可能会被你的善行所影响，可知，应该使用被动语态，故将influenced改为be influenced.

第八处：考查固定短语搭配，句意：因此，所有的人将会互帮互助，as a result因此，故将In改为As.

第九处：考查逻辑连接词，句意：所有的人也许都会互帮互助，并且这个世界将变得更好，前后两句是自然承接的关系，故将or改为and.

第十处：考查形容词，句意：既然志愿者工作如此有意义，我们应该呼吁更多的人积极参与到这个活动中，is(be动词)应该与形容词连用，故将meaningfully改为meaningful.