Question

【题目】就“吸烟是否有害”这个主题发表你的看法，写一篇100词左右的文章，至少包含以下内容要点：

1．一些人认为吸烟有好处，如：能让自己放松；带给自己灵感；是潇洒和成熟的标志；

2．另一些人认为吸烟有害健康，如：对自己的身体有害；使别人吸二手烟，对他们的身体也有害；污染环境；

3．你的看法和理由。

参考词汇：灵感inspiration；潇洒smartness；成熟maturity；二手烟secondhand smoke

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Answer 1

【答案】The opinions on smoking vary from person to person. Some people are in favor of smoking. They see smoking as an effective way to relax themselves. They also think that inspiration will come at once when they are smoking. Moreover, they even consider it a symbol of intelligence and maturity. Meanwhile, others argue that smoking brings nothing but harm. They think that smoking is harmful to the health of smokers as well as those who are forced to be secondhand smokers. What's worse, smoking pollutes the environment.

As far as I am concerned, I'm firmly against smoking because smoking is not only bad for our body, but also a waste of money.

In a word, it's time for us to stop smoking.

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求就“吸烟是否有害”这个主题发表你的看法，写一篇100词左右的文章。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点：1．一些人认为吸烟有好处，如：能让自己放松；带给自己灵感；是潇洒和成熟的标志；2．另一些人认为吸烟有害健康，如：对自己的身体有害；使别人吸二手烟，对他们的身体也有害；污染环境；3．你的看法和理由。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如:vary from 不同，be in favor of支持。还使用了宾语从句They also think that inspiration will come at once when they are smoking.和宾语句Meanwhile,

others argue that smoking brings nothing but harm.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。