Question

2．在繁重的课业负担之下，中学生也应该学会适度地自我放松，请你围绕"Ways to get relaxed"这一话题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：
1．自我放松的途径：看电视、体育锻炼、上网等
2．我更喜欢的途径及理由：…
注意：
   （1）在表达"我更喜欢的途径及理由"时，请从要点1中选择一项进行阐述．
   （2）词数：100左右，文章开头已给出（不计词数）．
There are various ways to get relaxed for middle school students．_______________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇关于Ways to get relaxed的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：自我放松的途径有看电视、体育锻炼、上网等；我更喜欢的途径及理由．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为中学生自我放松的途径．第二部分为作者最喜欢的自我放松途径及理由．
重点短语与句型：
get relaxed 放松
take exercise 锻炼
as well也，还，和
 appeal to 呼吁；对…有吸引力
at home and abroad国内外
高分句型一：We can also watch TV，where we are able to enjoy varieties of colorful programs both in Chinese and English as well．此句用了where 引导非限制性定语从句
高分句型二：For another，the Internet makes it easy for me to make friends with people both at home and abroad，for it is a great joy to communicate with them．此句用了it 作形式主语，不定式为真正主语．

解答 There are various ways to get relaxed for middle school students．One way is to take exercise by walking，running，playing basketball or football，etc．We can also watch TV，where we are able to enjoy varieties of colorful programs both in Chinese and English as well（高分句型一）．Moreover，we can surf the Internet to get some relaxation and entertainment．（中学生自我放松的途径）    
As for me，surfing the Internet appeals to me most．For one thing，the Internet offers a wide range of activities for relaxation．In general，I keep track of the latest news as an enjoyment．Sometimes，I play computer games to refresh myself．For another，the Internet makes it easy for me to make friends with people both at home and abroad，for it is a great joy to communicate with them．（高分句型二）In addition，having a glimpse of the vivid pictures and live videos on the Internet contributes to regaining my energy．（作者最喜欢的自我放松途径及理由）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．