Question

假设你是李华，前天是你的外国朋友Anne的生日。你本答应要参加她的生日聚会，但你当时正忙着准备期末考试，不小心忘了赴约。请写封信向Anne表达你的歉意，说明原因，并提出补救的方法。
注意：
1.词数120词左右；
2.文章中不得出现真实班级和姓名；  
3.可适当增加内容。
Dear Anne，
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Yours truly，
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Anne，
I am indeed very sorry that I didn’t attend your birthday party the day before yesterday. I feel awful about it and want to apologize to you.
It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I should have come and celebrated the precious moment with you. But the end-of-term examination is around the corner， so I was too busy preparing for the exam that I forgot the appointment. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examination？ I do long for a pleasant chat with you.
It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of such a happy get-together. Once again， please accept my sincere apology.
Yours truly，
Li Hua

试题分析：本次写作任务是就写信对忘记赴约这件事道歉，属于应用文写作。具体到本次写作，考生要先审清题目要求，确定好作文人称、时态、写作要点、段落等基本内容。本文是一封信，因此以第一人称为主。本文有三个要点1．道歉；2．说明原因3．补救方法。明确作文的基本内容后，就是选用准确的词汇和恰当的句子来表达。如要点一涉及的主要词汇有sorry; apologize，选用主系表的基本句式，可以是 I am indeed very sorry that。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如feel awful about，apologize to sb.，It was nice of sb. to do sth.，around the corner, be busy doing，prepare for，long for，chat with；还运用句型which引导的非限定性定语从句。并注意了句子的衔接如：but，so … that …等等。