Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last weekend, Tom and I paid a visit to the Summer Palace, that proved to be very interesting and rewarding.

We arrived at the entrance early in the morning and I introduced the history of the park for Tom briefly. The moment we entered the park, Tom attracted by the beautiful scenery and we walked along the beautiful lake happily. Soon, we noticed the elderly man practicing calligraphy on the ground, with a bucket of water aside. Held a big writing brush in his hand, he wrote the Chinese character for “longevity”. As well as other tourists, we couldn’t help but admiring his skills.

To our surprise, the elderly man invited Tom to have a try. With his help, Tom completed his first calligraphy task, the two Chinese character for “China”, quite successful. Before we left, we took a photo together to memorize this a valuable experience. In the picture, Tom held the writing brush and the elderly man smiled, with his thumb up.

I was such glad that I could help my foreign friend to learn about the art of the language we have been using for several thousand years. In addition, I rediscovered the charm of Chinese culture.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】that→which

【2】for→to

【3】attracted前面加was

【4】the→an

【5】Held→Holding

【6】admiring→admire

【7】character→characters

【8】successful→successfully

【9】this后面的a去掉

【10】such→so

【解析】

【1】分析句子，可知是非限制性定语从句，先行词是前面的句子Tom and I paid a visit to the Summer Palace，故要用which作为关系词。

【2】introduce sth. to sb.介绍某物给某人，介词用to，故要把for改为to。

【3】Tom是被吸引，所以要用被动语态，故在attracted前加was。

【4】elderly man是头一次提到，所以不能用定冠词，要用不定冠词。

【5】本句的逻辑主语是he，与hold是主谓关系，故要用现在分词，不是过去分词。

【6】couldn’t help but do sth.不得不做某事，这里是指不得不佩服他的技巧；如果结构中没有but，则help后面的动词用动名词形式。

【7】前面有数词two，故名词要用复数。

【8】quite successful在此作状语，修饰句子的动词completed，所以successful要用副词形式。

【9】句中已经有指示代词this，指示代词与不定冠词不能连用，根据句意是表示“这次经历”，所以要去掉a。

【10】这里修饰的是形容词，故要用so，构成so...that...句型。