Question

为庆祝6月5日“世界环境保护日”，某英文报社将举行一次英文作文竞赛，呼吁人们保护环境，提出有效的保护措施。请以下面的内容为参考，写一篇文章投稿。

1. 回收利用有用物质，掩埋有害物质；

2. 废水、废气要净化；

3. 植树造林，保护环境；

4. 保护海洋，禁止过度捕鱼；

5. 充分利用自然资源。

注意：

1. 词数：120左右；

2. 可适当发挥，但不要逐句翻译。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version:

Nowadays, pollution is getting worse and worse. The damage to the environment is getting serious. In my opinion, we should take some measures to protect the environment.

To protect the environment, I think we should do the following things. Some garbage can be recycled, while the harmful things should be put in a safe place. Smoke and wastewater should be cleaned before they go into the air. If too many trees are cut down, forests will disappear. We should do our best to take good care of the environment. For example, we should plant trees and stop using disposable chopsticks and stop throwing garbage everywhere. With modern fishing methods, more and more fish are caught. If too many fish are taken from the sea, there will soon be none left. If the rivers are polluted, we will die from the poison. We should make full use of natural resources, or we will be in great damage very soon.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。

考点：提纲作文

点评：本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。