Question

通过在班级内进行调查，我们发现很多同学在生活和饮食方面都存在一些影响健康的习惯，请你根据下面提示以Form a Good Living Habit为题写一篇短文。

现象：一些同学不吃早饭，课间吃一些零食(snacks)充饥；不喜欢吃蔬菜而喜欢吃一些高热量的食物，平常也缺乏锻炼。

结果：有些同学体重开始增加，不时出现一些健康问题。

建议：要养成有规律的生活习惯，按时吃早饭，多吃些健康食品，并加强锻炼。

说明：1、文章开头已给出，不记入总词数。

2、100字左右。

Form a Good Living Habit

Through the survey we find that                                              

                                                                             

                                                                              

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Form a Good Living Habit

Through the survey we find that many students have some bad habits in life and diet. For example, some students don’t eat breakfast . When they feel hungry, they eat some snacks between classes. And also some others don’t like to eat vegetables but enjoy eating the kind of food rich in calories. What’s worse they did not do enough exercise. As a result many of them begin to gain weight and often have some health problems.

In order to keep healthy, therefore, we should realize the importance of healthy diet and try to develop good living habits. It will benefit us to eat breakfast on time and have more healthy food. Besides, we should also take more exercise.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。