Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每句不超过两个错误；

2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My mother is a village woman, who is already in fifties.She has very little education, and she knows knowledge is of very importance to young people. She often asked me how I get along with my studies and encourages me study hard. My mother does everything she can for me so that I can spend more time on my study. Once she was bad ill and had stayed in bed

for several days. When I got home, I found the light was still off and mother was sitting in bed, made new clothes for me! I was so deeply moved that tear came to my eyes. So is my mother, a kind and hard-working woman.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 in fifties – in her fifties

 and改成 but

 very改成great

 ask改成asked

 study改成to study

 bad ill – badly ill

 off改成on

 made改成making

 tear 改成 tears

 so 改成such

【解析】

试题分析：文章介绍了作者的妈妈，接受过很少的教育，但是她知道知识对年轻人很重要，经常鼓励作者努力学习，自己也是很善良和勤奋的女性。

 句意：妈妈已经50几岁了。In one’s fifties 在某人几十岁的时候

 句意：她接受过很少的教育，但是她知道知识对年轻人很重要。and改成 but

 very是副词，应该修饰形容词或副词，importance是名词，用 great修饰

 这句话时间状语是often，用的是一般过去式，

 妈妈鼓励我努力学习。Encourage sb to do sth，study改成to study

 有一次她病的很厉害，不得不卧床几天。用副词badly 修饰ill

 当我回家的时候，看见灯还亮着。On是副词，“开着”

 妈妈坐在床上，为我做新衣服。用现在分词做伴随状语：made改成making

 我感动的流泪了。tear 表示“眼泪”用复数 tears

 这就是我妈妈一个善良的勤奋的女性。 Such做代词，指代“这种情况”，

考点：考查短文改错