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2．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom要来你校任教．为了方便，他打算在学校附近租房子，发来邮件向你咨询合适的房源． 请你根据下表提供的信息回复邮件．

房子地点：龙湾大街 面积布局：2楼，一室，一厅，70m2，朝南．家具齐全． 环境交通：小区优美、安静；附近有体育馆可以健身；购物、交通便利． 每月房租：4500元 联系电话：15198269512

注意：1．词数不少于100．
          2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
          3．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
          参考词汇：公寓   apartment
Dear Tom，
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I am writing to tell you that I've found an apartment which may meet your needs．
我写信是为了告诉你我已经找到了一处能令你满意的公寓．
高分句型二：
If you are interested in it，please call 15198269512．如果你有兴趣的话，请拨打15198269512．
句型一 which may meet your needs．该句是一个which引导的定语从句，which在句中充当主语，替代前面的先行词apartment．
句型二 If you are interested in it…该句是一个由if引导的条件状语从句，从句的谓语部分使用了一个重要的固定短语 be interested in..对…感兴趣

解答 Dear Tom，
    I am writing to tell you that I've found an apartment which may meet your needs．（高分句型一）（写作目的）It's on the second floor，facing the south，with an area of 70 square meters．It has a bedroom and a sitting room，fully furnished．Located in Longwan Street，it offers convenient shopping and easy traffic．The apartment is in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood．And there is also a gym nearby where you can go and take exercise regularly．（房况说明）The rent is 4，500 yuan per month．If you are interested in it，please call 15198269512．（高分句型二）If you need any more help，just let me know．
Looking forward to meeting you soon．
 
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 本书面表达为提纲类，该类书面表达一般给考生规定了写作要点，写作时应紧密联系所给提示，用准确的语言表达清楚，简洁明了．